The Land I Got Lost

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This is a short story of my imagination glitch i had, when i was having lovely brandy !!!!

The Land I Got Lost


In a far far galaxy, there was a planet, which had created their opportunity to travel beyond the stars and explore the universe. They are ignorant of other planets dimensions. To overcome this problem they found a device which can shrink them as dirt or blew them big as the mountain .In pursuit of a habitable realm for them, they have reached solar system. As planet earth is one of the known habitable zones in solar system they try to explore the possibilities of their existence there. They sent one of their astronauts to planet Earth


During his landing on planet earth, the astronaut shrinks himself to small object so that he can float in the air. Even though his landing was successful his logs to the spaceship were only about eight hours. Then he is lost without any trace. Below is his log to his mother ship.


 (For our understanding the logs are de coded in English)

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Reading loud and clear, I am about to land in t minus 180 seconds. Not sure of the location everything is a blur and of grains.

 It was smooth landing I could see the light is yet here and land has the soft texture and good aroma. HA HA HA am lying down... Wow, it is a wonderful experience. Moving ahead …. There is more turbulence something like a storm is trying to wipe me.

Heading towards 12 o clock I could see trees which are black from root to top.   Reached the forest... I repeat I have reached the forest…

This forest has smooth silky, fiber-like trees and smells awesome. The place is damn with cool temperature and getting low for every ten seconds. I love this place and am lying on its roots. I have to take a nap here and it seems the best place I ever could.

You poor guys, who seeing this log, it is more than what you understand from my message. Am in heaven I love this to core. The vibration and stream of liquid flowing under this forest are rhythmic. I could feel the heat now and it is getting dark.

Am moving out of the forest now and thanking god for giving me wonderful nap on this forest with plenty of dreams.

 Now am seeing the same place again, where I got landed moving ahead. I could see a black farm on both sides trimmed perfectly and surrounded by beautiful land.

I couldn't stop praising the innovation of creator of this exotic place. Moving up there is big mountain and I am on top and it slides down.

Sliding and reached the end of the mountain I could see there are two dark caves at the end of this mountain.

 Am freezing in this land due to its temperature and texture which is so soft.

I descend towards the cave and could feel the hot wind coming out of it in regular frequency and it’s awesome to be here. Due to the hot wind, I couldn't sustain so am moving forward. Now am in a pulpy land with red texture with more moisture and seems shining in lights.

Wow, this is like hundreds of aurora we saw in Planet Jupiter in a single shot. I could say god is so biased on making this wonderful planet earth and its elements.

The smell from this red pulpy land is tempting me. And I got mad and this feel is never been on any planet we tried. Am sure this vibration could do emotional changes in our beings. As whole in these eight hours of journey, I learned there is something beyond our imagination and there is force makes us believe there is a creator.

Stopping the logs right now and am about to resize me to our normal mode and will send you the exact position to get extracted by the mother ship. 


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Now it is time to get him blew up to see where he is traveling since he shrunk himself to a size of dirt not knowing earth's dimension. He used the machine to resize and made sure there is no noise. He was thrown out of the land he traveled and he got blew up by falling. Now he got resized to his default size and shocked to see a bedroom of a beautiful girl sleeping in the moonlight.

It took him second to realize that he was traveling in beautiful girl’s face. The black forest was her hair and mountain with caves was her nose and the red pulpy land was her lips.   He was stunned to see such beautiful creation of god and he doesn't want to spoil this travel by making his planetians conquering it. He decided his decision and turns on his logging once again.


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After I moved back to default size I realized I missed my tracking device on forest and there is a heavy wind up coming.

 Anything could be it, I loved this travel and this creation of god. I could end this travel by saying this is “The Land I Got Lost “


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He destroys log and tracking machine. He shrinks him again to dirt and floats till he ends up in her ear. Even though he knows his life is about short-lived in this size, he wants to explore the beauty as much he could. His madness towards the god creation “The women “made him get lost in that land forever.


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Submitted: March 25, 2016

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Its nice. I'm not much of a critic, but I liked it. I imagine English isn't you're first language which is fine, but a few words seemed out of place? I guess? Sorry, the point I'm getting at, is that it was alright, and keep trying. I look forward to more of your work! :D

Fri, March 25th, 2016 6:10am


Your work is really good, and I can't help myself when I find an opportunity to constructive criticise, so can I just say: your English (at times) didn't make much sense... I'm really sorry for this comment, I just needed to tell you.
--Good read, though

Fri, March 25th, 2016 10:06am


Wow...I really don't know what to say. The original premise of the story subject is commendable. I did have a little trouble following. But, it was well-written.

Fri, March 25th, 2016 10:29am


The Land I Got Lost

I'm pretty sure that English isn't your first language, but you asked me to give valuable feedback, so I'm going to be blunt and straight-forward. It's a really good story and plot line, I will say. But you should use something like Grammarly for corrections and word choice and stuff. Try to use grammar and word dictionaries for better writing if you can't download Grammarly. Again, the plot line is really good, though.

Sat, April 2nd, 2016 3:05am


This is a great work. Had a nice time reading it. Keep it up. :)

Mon, May 2nd, 2016 4:08am

Anthony Zimmerman

Not bad. I wonder which land was what at the end. Good Luck! Anthony

Sat, May 14th, 2016 9:35pm


It's very nice! I enjoyed it.

Mon, July 11th, 2016 7:49am

N. C. Ferrao

An interesting read and great work.

Tue, August 29th, 2017 7:09am

Kevin Broughton

Great idea for a story. I too found it a little difficult to follow at times, but it is still a good story.

Thu, June 28th, 2018 9:53am

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