With me in Thought

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The thoughts of a person who has just realized her feelings for a fairly new acquaintance.

I stand here,
Looking at your face,
Wondering what you do in life,
When you’re not in this place

I know your life’s not easy,
It’s not the same as mine,
But while you’re in this place with me
You always act just fine

Although I hardly know you,
I’ve realized your worth,
I wish I could have known you
Every moment since your birth

I’ve noticed your compassion,
Your charm and all your wit,
Your tender disposition
I wish I could seize it

Take you to myself today,
Claim you as my own,
See your face every day,
Chat to you on the phone

I think that I might love you,
I know I probably do,
I’ve told many that I love them,
Meant it to only a few

You’re one of the ones that I mean it,
Though our time has only been short,
And even if we don’t meet again
You’ll always be with me in thought


Submitted: July 03, 2007

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ddrandall

really enjoyed the message here Kate... keep up the great work!... Duane

Wed, July 4th, 2007 5:49pm

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thanks

Wed, July 4th, 2007 3:56pm

amateur01

5 stars!! EXCELLENT!! love love it!! and i can totally relate!

Wed, July 4th, 2007 10:20pm

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thank you xxx

Wed, July 4th, 2007 4:00pm

Saturday Night

Well done Kate. Liked it very much.

Thu, July 5th, 2007 3:58am

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thanks xxx

Thu, July 5th, 2007 8:13am

leesah

love the structure and the language...great write kate:)

Thu, July 5th, 2007 8:21am

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thank you leesah xxx

Thu, July 5th, 2007 8:14am

JONATHAN

ITS VERY GOOD KATE I LOVED THE FEELING I GOT WHEN I READ IT.THANK YOU

Tue, July 24th, 2007 12:01am

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thank you for reading and commenting, glad you liked it xxx

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 5:10pm

EdwardJBradleySr

Kate:

Well written and expressed.

Angels, sometimes, visit us in human form. Just wish they would accumulate and remain with us. Like our enemies and demons. Just visiting! I guess.

Happier trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, August 8th, 2007 3:12am

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so true, luckily of all the ones who've briefly visited me I've managed to hang onto one. makes life with living xxx

Wed, August 8th, 2007 4:06pm

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