First To Die Part one

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
A group of high school students decides to travel to hawaii by boat. but little that they know that a killer was following them, step by step.

Submitted: April 21, 2011

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It all started in early May where young Debra Reese, along with her friends, Emma, Daniel, John and Christine were out on a vacation to Hawaii. They were to travel there by boat, a luxurious one too. Debra's mother is the owner of a big machine company and her father died by the age of three. Debra and her friends were not too say the least risk takers. Their parent's have endlessly told them 'No' but for the sake of this vacation trip to Hawaii? Who the hell cares! 'Are we there yet?' Asked inpatient Emma. 'Nope, we aren't I guess we'll be there in another few hours, I'll talk to the captain and make sure that everything's alright.' Debra answered. She walked to the front of the boat and saw the captain's hands on the wheel. She tried to call him, but there came no reply. Debra walked nearer to the captain and there he was - dead. there was blood gushingout of his neck and his eyes were opened, Debra was shocked. She screamed so loud that the others came to look. 'Holy Mackerels! Who killed him?!' Christine asked. 'I don't know! I found him dead while holding the wheels!' Debra exclaimed. While both of them cried over the incident, the others try to solve the mystery. 'Where was he the last time we saw him alive?' Daniel asked. 'he's still at the wheels and muttering about dinner.' John replied. 'I'm not a proffessional forensic but something tells me that he has been dead long cause he looks cold and hard.' Emma said.. 'Good point, the two things we have to watch out are number  one, whoever killed him, and number two, how are we suppose to get out of here.' Daniel piped up. The others agreed on this plan and decided to stick to it. They separated each other to groups and went out searching whoever killed the captain. On their hands, they held a knife and a gun. Daniel and Emma, walking together, crept inside the enormous cabin and saw nancy, the maid, lying dead on the ground. Emma was disgusted and screamed. The others came after them and saw the maid. 'Okay, we need to be extra careful, first the captain and now the maid, we need to stick together.' Jhon said. The others nodded and went further down the hallway. They went into the first cabin. Everything was neatly packed and cleaned, so does the other four cabins. Just as they were about to head back to the front side of the ship, they were stopped by a mysterious man with a dagger on his hands. He wore a dark jacket and gloves, the dagger was dripping with blood. This must be the killer. thought Debra and the others. They ran to the opposite way but found a dead end. \\the man got closer and closer, but as he reached nearer, he didn't kill of them.  'I'm giving you one more chance to live, there are to small motor boats, both of them equipped with full oil and a first aid kit, for your information, as the captain's dead, you must not know where you're going right now, I installed a GPRS system to the motor boats, I will take the first motor boat, it can carry only one person, the other one, well, you decided for yourself.' the mysterious man said a he smirked and walked to the front deck. The group can hear him starting the engines and sailing off the ocean.

'now what should we do? only one person gets to live.' Debra said. Daniel's eyes widened and without another second to lose, he grabbed the shotgun and shot Debra in the head, she died and lied down to the floor. When the others approached Daniel, he shot all of them, one by one, endlessly dying in tears. So there was only man left, which is, of course Daniel. He hopped on to the motor boats and started the engines, making his way to shore. Little did he know that the mysterious man is there waiting for him with a gun on his hands. Once Daniel approached shore, the mysterious man shot him right on the stomach and Daniel died. So that was the end, none of them survived. and who the mysterious guy was? See for yourself.

THE END OF PART 1


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