Poem by: katrina soroya
feelings, lonely, sad, hurt
Submitted: December 13, 2007
© Copyright 2016 katrina soroya. All rights reserved.
Well, you've communicated the raw emotions, the angst of a broken relationship. Now, can you expand on those thoughts more poetically? Can you try for some length in your writings? Can you express those feelings in word pictures, exploring their depths? Can you tell your audience, poetically, how you plan to over come the problem?
thanks for the comment .x
This is powerful. I did like it!
Good Katrina. Sometimes you don't need anything more than this to deliver the goods. Like it.
Brian Peza Perrins
Good work Katrina
Interesting, unmitigated, simple, and free of the hyperbolic complexity most poets incorporate into their work nowadays. I liked it.
The simple ones are my favourites, this is a great example of that! So few words but you've said it all! Great job! ~ Nixie
Thanks so much .x
At first I didn't see where this was going, that is until I read the last line, then it all came together ;o) It is simple, yet sweet ^_^ I like it.
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