Skinny Love by errr... Skinny love (lol) book review

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

3rd review

Skinny love by err...Skinny love is quite a unique story!

The story follows with a young beautfiul eighteen year old who is going to live with her dad to 'bond' for awhile when she meets Killen his girlfriend's son. Soon enough they fall for eachother and have to face many obstacles such as (Zachary the girl's friend/ boyfriend I dunno and Amanda Killen's 'pouty' blonde beauty) Of course that's the least of their problems for now...they are worried that once their mother and father marry they will have to love eachother like a brother and a sister! Which of course they dont want to happen. Nah-ah not in a million years

I've read the story uptill eighteen chaps and it's not complete so I dont know how this is going to end. I honestly have to say this wasn't the best story I've heard but it's still in my good books! However , I dont understand one thing. In each chapter the story is mixed up in the past and the present for example (THIS IS ONLY AN EXAMPLE!!!) :

I get up for breakfast and go downstairs (I'm OKAY with that, BTW that's the present) I sat down on my table and ate my oreos (OKAY......I thought it was mean to be in Present sentences??)

But!overall I think your story was FANTASTIC! Dont worry about the whole tense thing that was just advising not being snide and rude!! I loved all the characters ...they were DEFINATELY not cliche and totally fresh.

Well done love! Carry on I'd like to read some more!r

Katy the critic

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Submitted: April 06, 2012

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RubyRose81196

cool review. I'm loving the story :")

Tue, May 8th, 2012 11:03am

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