A mid summer's romance

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Dan and Louise are best friends and they are spending the summer and Dan asks her out what will she say? Dan has another supprise up his sleeve just wonder what that is ...

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Submitted: September 04, 2012

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People sat around everywhere chilling in these long nights "Isn't this amazing" Louise said "If you mean chilling in the gorgeous sunset, then i'm certianly with you Dan replied. Moving the cup and replacing it with some paper "What are you doing?" "Never you mind, you just relax and enjoy the sun, even get a tan, just leave me to do this in peace then you will see after i have done what i'm doing ok" Dan qouted getting started in his drawing with some hills, some sunset and some houses in the distance,then some people sunbathing on the sand. He asks Louise if she can guess what it is, she looks around and can see that the picture is of them relaxing on the sand. Louise rang Josie "Hey, how are you?' 'i'm not to well been up all night coughing hun' 'bless , that answers our question then hun' 'What was that question?' 'We just wanted to know if you  wanted to come and hang out and see Dan's picture but your probably to tired hun' 'that would be lovely hun but your right' 'it's ok i'm sure your'll see it when your better ge well soon hun bye for now". Louise and Dan went back to louise's house for a sleep over, On the way there they popped to see Dan's mum. Dan's mum said "Now be good for Louise's mum and for Louise" she chuckled. Later that night "Hey, thanks for letting me sleep tonight it's just that my mum's busy with her friends trying to cheer them up with some of her jokes. Dan was seeing if he could ring his mum to see if he could stay the weekend to see if he could meet Louise's father "Hey, mum your not busy yet are you because i just wondered if if i could stay around Louise's for the weekend as her dad is coming home please?' 'well can't see why not' 'is that a yes then? YEAH' thanks your the best' 'i know" Dan went running to tell Louise hen he sees Leah laying on her bed reading a book and thought nothing of it until Louise asked him "Did you see Leah " "Yeah, the girl in the room next door?" "yeah, she's my adopt sister, my mum has wanted foster since she was a teenager and mum went round a care home wanted to foster a polite quite little girl and they said Leah was the perfect match for that, they waas right, she's lovely. "do yo want to indroduce me to her" Dan ask "Ok come on then" she looked at Louise "Who's that Louise" Leah stumbled  "This is Dan, my best friend" "Hey Dan" "Hey you alright?" "Yes thanks" "You wanna come in Louise's room with us?" "Is that alrite Louise?" she asked. " Of course u can hun come on we'll play a game" "snakes and ladders anyone" Dan enquired


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