Never Lasting Love Story

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

For anyone who has been in love or who believes in love

 

In Early February they first met. 
She was neither a blonde nor a brunette. 
Everytime he saw her he heard the Clarinet, 
He blushed everytime their eyes met. 
To him she was his sun rise and sun set. 
He thought of her as a princess he could never get. 
He asked her to do his project and was forever in her debt. 
They exchanged numbers and tried to connect. 
She thought of him as "just another guy",
who wanted to make her wet. 
She only spoke to him when others left. 
She was friends with his Ex 
and that was something she could never forget. 
Few months later she complained of guilt and fret. 
This lead to making, both of them upset. 
The boy wished his life had a button of reset. 
Finally in late January the dust settled, 
she told him to move on and forget. 
He sat in a corner and silently wept. 
He never understood why she left. 


Copyright 2013 


Submitted: January 30, 2013

© Copyright 2022 Kazabi. All rights reserved.

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thumblina Aka vandana

nice poem

i loved it

Its sad,I feel sad for the boy

Wed, January 30th, 2013 2:41pm

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Thank you

Wed, January 30th, 2013 7:37am

Kazabi


Thank you for your thoughts.
Yeah its always the boy who suffers.

Wed, January 30th, 2013 3:17pm

Mindy Rodman

nice rhyming scheme

Wed, January 30th, 2013 3:33pm

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Thank you Mindy.

Wed, January 30th, 2013 7:34am

browneyedsoul511

Love the rhymes. Loved the storytelling style, kinda like a country song. It is a beautiful poem and I'm glad I read this. Thank you for writing this :)

Wed, January 30th, 2013 4:24pm

Author
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Thank you so much for your positive comments.

Wed, January 30th, 2013 9:27am

SG93

Decent poem, though I don't agree that it's always the boy who suffers. That's a pretty naive statement.

Wed, January 30th, 2013 8:09pm

Author
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Thank you, We believe what we believe.

Wed, January 30th, 2013 1:00pm

Coralie

I loved how almost every line rhymed. I've never seen something like that before, so it was pretty awesome to read a poem that shakes things up a bit. I felt so bad for the boy in the poem, it was kind of shitty for the girl to leave. But, there are two sides to every story, and sometimes more than that. Great poem. I loved it.

Thu, January 31st, 2013 5:37am

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Thank you. You can also take a look at my other poem titled "Times We had" it would give u a better idea of the whole story. And i will be putting up a couple of poems by tomorrow and that should reflect both sides of the story.

Thu, January 31st, 2013 12:42am

Naan

:(
this makes me sad
nonetheless I do like your style
and you're a good writer :)

Sun, February 3rd, 2013 1:40pm

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Thank you.
Well real life love stories are much heartening than reel life.
I think you should join poetry.com too it will provide you with a wider aspect and help you become a better writer.

Sun, February 3rd, 2013 6:21am

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