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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

A once married man reminisces on the wife who left him for her other lover.

Submitted: May 27, 2011

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I loved the constant theme of the ivy. It was a great read! Please write more!! (I read Good Vibrations too, which was great.)

Fri, May 27th, 2011 5:42pm


Thank you, thank you, thank you! I am going to post more of my older work, but I have some recent prompts on my blog too. :-) decisionsdecisi0ns.blogspot.com

Fri, May 27th, 2011 4:41pm

Steve Fettinger

Good and creative writing.

Sat, May 28th, 2011 6:00am


another gem. i love your descriptive powers. amazing! can i be your fan please? pretty please? (i especially like the ivy that is woven through the story) ties it nicely together. good job. screw computers, you're too good at this.

Sat, May 28th, 2011 12:13pm


Beautiful but so sad, so descriptive and personal. This was so different and it gives me so many ideas (but then again just about anything gives me ideas) you're an inspiring writer and I love people who can write like that, please write more.....thats an order btw haha (kidding) but still write more your gift should be practiced, you could be EXTRAORDINARY! and now I'm rambling so yeah keep writing haha :)
Write Like the Wind! Lol

Sun, May 29th, 2011 6:01pm

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