End of hide and seek

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Must read to understand i´m not you i can not be.

I´m alone in light of the day

Standing quietly hoping to be toched

Looking to be seen

Shouting to be heard

Yet my blood go cold

My soul grows old

The time is up my body falls

As death gently takes my soul

Have I lived for myself

Did I fullfil what ive hoped

I can not say but for today

I´m free.


Submitted: April 08, 2012

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In the first part, you allowed your reader to feel the sadness that the persona of your poem is feeling and at the latter part happiness is what the persona feels. It seems to me as though the thought of dying is what the person know as the ultimate happiness. Thank you for allowing us your readers to feel the happiness and sadness all at the same time. Yet another superb poem. Keep up the good work and please check your spelling and punctuation.
Godbless and Love,love,love!

Sun, April 8th, 2012 11:11am


Yes indeed but ultimate happines is not free either you feel it only after you did all that could have been done

Sun, April 8th, 2012 1:10pm

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