The Elements

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is like the world around us, like water, air, fire, nature.

The Elements

The sky is blue;

the grass is as green as the trees.

The moon is lighter than the earth and

the sun is rising up

as the day starts to begin.

Thunder roars as the rain drops drum the earth.

The ground shakes as the city

collapses and complete darkness falls

as the moon rises to it's final destination.

Submitted: August 08, 2008

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EP Simpson

This is very good! You are very talented at getting the reader to visualize everything that you want them to. Keep up the awesome work!

Fri, August 8th, 2008 7:10pm


Thank you

Fri, August 8th, 2008 12:43pm

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