One of those classic teenage romances
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Poem by: kidarox123
There is a barrier between us,
keeping us apart,
but i can't stop thinking about you,
it's been like that from the start,
I know it's wrong,
but i want it so bad,
your eyes leave me intoxicated,
and then just plain sad,
I can't explain it to my friends,
they can't comprehend,
what is it about you,
that's left me at a dead end,
i swear i'm over it,
there's nothing to know,
but my insides say otherwise
everytime i see you they overflow,
I stay silent,
just a smile here and there,
waiting for you,
even though it's not fair,
Someday you'll be released,
i'll be free then too,
Everything will be available,
but the feelings won't be new
but for now i'll keep to myself,
dreaming in my head,
for the day that you'll be mine,
instead.
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I really like those last two stanzas where you seem to come to your senses but then decide not to. Brilliant!
craaig
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thanks! Yeah i don't really know what i was feeling for thinking when i wrote this. It just put it all out there.
unlike craaig..
i like the 1st and 3rd stanza best..
lol, its just me,,
nicely written
.x peace
Author
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Thanks! (Those are my favorite too!)
hi! k. absolutely lovely. i wish that day is not far off when he'll be her's. this can be set to music. can fill the air with romance. lol. ;-)
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Thanks!
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