Dear mom... (happy birthday!)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My mom's birthday coming up and I make my own cards, putting a poem on it and want to know if it's good :)

Dear Mom,
If I'm sad,
You're there
If I'm scared,
You're there
If I'm mad,
You're there
If I'm happy,
It's because

You're there.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!


Submitted: July 29, 2009

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TwilightLuver

Yes, killertabby, your Mother is VERY lucky. Lol. It's cute.

Fri, July 31st, 2009 3:58pm

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Why, thank you! Why'd you cap the 'm' in mother? SHE DOESN"T DESERVE IT! Lol jk. Ay, can yeh check yer phone every once in a while, man?

Fri, July 31st, 2009 12:19pm

JenDamsel

ooh so nice! i wish i could write cute things like that. mmm making my own cards is a good idea! but i might end up putting one of my twisted poems there lol that would scar my mom though... maybe not a good idea for me after all

Tue, August 4th, 2009 8:59pm

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uh yeah, maybe not... lol
thanks for reading it :)

Wed, August 5th, 2009 5:12am

Baz

Nice! I'm a dad of 3 boys, and I hope someday that one of my kids thinks of me this way. Like it!

Fri, August 7th, 2009 8:58pm

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thanks! and I'm sure they will

Sat, August 8th, 2009 8:29am

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