Boredom has set in and looking out at a rainy day, and checking the sky, a sudden impulse to GO out in it hits you. What do you do?

As I Sit

watching the rainfall come down quick

I want to swiftly rundown

the street, as water and raindrops call to me

Go, to race the sky, beat the sun

and break the rainbow, to finish first

Now I no longer sit, I stretch,

Yes thats me

I can be quite complex

As I no longer sit but thirst,

to pursue a quest

and beat the rest.


Submitted: September 12, 2007

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Myke 247

I really like this.. nice piece. :)

Wed, September 12th, 2007 7:09pm

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Thanks Mikey, Glad you enjoyed it.

Wed, September 12th, 2007 2:05pm

Mys Lyke Meeh

Hmmn...a good one.

Fri, September 28th, 2007 3:44pm

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Glad you like it..Thanks again!

Wed, October 17th, 2007 9:44pm

LilGpoet

This is reeaaalllly good. I like the whole "break the rainbow, to finish first," line. Thats really awesome. I gave it an "I Like It" vote. =D

Thu, February 28th, 2008 12:14am

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Glad you liked it, seems it inspired you as it did me! Thanks Kid!

Wed, February 27th, 2008 11:48pm

Cathy Chui

I love how the poem starts off slowly, and accelerates really really quickly, then slows down so the reader can catch up. Or...so it seemed to me as I read it in my mind.

Tue, April 15th, 2008 9:00am

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That is amazing! I wrote from a runner's boredom to building anticipation of running. Thanks for the comment Cathy.

Wed, April 16th, 2008 9:16pm

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