When I Look At Myself In The Mirror
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Poem by: kimiko18
When I look at myself in the mirror
I see me, but in plain view
I was hoping to see something greater
But there was nothing I could do
When I look at myself in the mirror
There are friends that are in my mind
I smile and think of happy moments
It seems that life was going fine
When I look at myself in the mirror
I saw greatness shining through
I felt myself being happy
It was something very new
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I always find looking in a mirror to be good therapy! I like the line "There are friends that are in my mind" we all have voices to contend with and I think liking yourself like you would a friend is important!
Good job ~ Nixie
kimiko18:
Well written. Terrific use of rhyme and rhythm(pacing). Liked this one. A lot. Most positive and life-affirming theme and message. To boost one's self-esteem.
Looking forward to reading more of yours when posted.
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Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
wonderful poem.well written.
please check out mine.
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