Superman Stole My Panties
Reads: 32844 | Likes: 0 | Shelves: 6 | Comments: 1120
Book by: kissmyoops
But when McDonald's gets robbed by a psycho with a gun to the back of her head, Avery can feel everything falling apart. A mysterious masked man dressed in all black appears out of no where, saving not only her life, but the rest of the restaurant's as well. And thus begins the meetings between Avery and the masked man. He hasn't claimed a name for himself, yet the media has been all over him.
Unoffically known as The Man With The Green Slash, he has taken a liking to Avery. His arrogant attitude matched with the mystery of him leaves Avery curious for more.
And soon she finds herself struggling to figure out who the Green Slash really is under the mask.
Table of Contents
Submitted: June 24, 2011
Submitted: June 24, 2011
Submitted: June 25, 2011
Submitted: June 28, 2011
Submitted: July 04, 2011
Submitted: July 15, 2011
Submitted: July 21, 2011
Submitted: July 29, 2011
Submitted: August 08, 2011
Submitted: August 18, 2011
Submitted: August 26, 2011
Submitted: September 01, 2011
Submitted: September 11, 2011
Submitted: September 13, 2011
Submitted: October 01, 2011
Submitted: October 25, 2011
Submitted: November 02, 2011
Submitted: November 10, 2011
Submitted: November 12, 2011
Submitted: November 13, 2011
Submitted: November 17, 2011
Submitted: November 22, 2011
Submitted: November 26, 2011
Submitted: November 27, 2011
Submitted: November 29, 2011
Submitted: December 06, 2011
Submitted: December 10, 2011
Submitted: December 19, 2011
Recent Comments
Nice n mysterious story as title say..... Written very nicely.. Lv it
Author
Reply
Thank you!
ohh please write h sequel plz plzz
Author
Reply
Sorry, no sequel! :(
So, I am just re-reading your superman stories because i miss them.... and i saw the reads... 4986 reads!!! DAMN GIRL!!! WAY TO GO!!! lol-star
Author
Reply
Thank you!:)
He's ok!! Yay! Now that I finally finished this one, its on to the Sequel :D
Author
Reply
It's called Unraveling :D Thanks for reading!
Last night I was up reading the rest of the story, I didn't sleep at all last night! I loved the tension between Tyler and Avery.x I was on booksie most of the time, not the whole time though. I have read quite a few chapters of Unraveling. x
Author
Reply
I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I loved writing it and I'm very honored that you took an interest!
this is really good, getting into it (: xx interesting Donovan is a teaser but soo sweet when comforting her after what happened xx
Author
Reply
I'm glad you're getting into it!(: He's a good friend!
.. This story is turning to be like a copy of Twilight. D;
The sneaking into Avers room, the car crash, and seriously, superabilities? Avery discovering who Superman is is just like Bella discovering Edward is a sparkly vampire. Oh god, I think I just threw up a bit in my mouth. ;)
Author
Reply
It's really not. Twilight was famous, but it follows the same story line that many people have been using for tons of years. The only difference now is that because it's so famous and publicized you can finally see how similar it is to almost everything. I actually have many different ways of going about these events. There's only so much you can do when you're trying to keep the meetings between to characters secretive but interesting while also emphasizing the supernatural part of one of the characters. I also think the personalities are absolutely nothing like those in Twilight d:
Haha, he's so cute. I'm surprised I didn't read this sooner since this got pretty popular in Wattpad as Watty Awards. ;D
I don't know why, but I love Superman already! :)
Author
Reply
Hahaha, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)
oh thank GOD! i read your others books and they ended with the guy dieing, i was fearing the worst there. DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT! please just let me know when Unravel is up! and to let you know how good your book was it's after midnight here, stayed up just to catch up. thank you for a better ending then war of the sexes!
Author
Reply
Hahahah, that was only one other book, and I got so much hate from that... xD Unraveling is currently up; it's listed under my 'featured' section on my profile too for easier access. Oh my goodness, I don't want you to miss sleep for this! But I really appreciate you reading
I don't know why...but I have a sickening feeling about who the killer is...and I don't want it to be him! X0
Author
Reply
Uhoh, You'll have to find out who in the next chapters :D
I'm probably very wrong, but I can't help the shaking feeling that Jake might be important in this story. Maybe he's the mysterious 'Superman' (probably not) or the evil villian. Either way, sorry I'm barely finishing reading this story, I've had a lot to do since school started and all. But amazing! XD
Author
Reply
Hmm, well, you'll have to read on to see if he is or isn't :D! Hahaha, it's understandable! Glad you're reading :D
Well structured and progressive plot. The imagery is vivid, and intriguing, but I WILL say that there are points where you get a word in your head and refuse to shake it off. For example, the second paragraph has the word "building" four times haha
I'm not saying that ruins anything, but I'm just trying to make you aware. Constructive criticism y'know?
Author
Reply
Oh yeah. Sometimes when it takes me a while to write, I end up using the same stuff repeatedly. I'm trying to get out of doing that often! Thank you very much! I do appreciate any & all constructive criticism. (:
I know there is a sequel, still it was too short and everything happened faster than you usually make it.
Author
Reply
The sequel or this story?
OMGG!!!! ITS REALLY THE END OF THIS!!! :O im sooo glad her gmaws ok! u really have no idea how badly i was freaking out!!!! I couldnt even pause to comment :P Well, now Im caught up, and who doesnt want to be updated on your sequel???? its just the matter of u updating the ppl :P this was one of the BEST stories Ive ever read on booksie!!! this was hilarious!!!! I love Tyler! :D And Donavan, everyone loves donnie lolzz I really enjoyed this banging novel, I really did!!! :d I cant wait for the sequel plz kmu!!!!!!!1 :D
Author
Reply
Yes it is. :) Ah, I'm sorry xD She's fine, it's all good :D The sequel's already up so I'm not gonna be updating anyone anymore. It's called Unraveling. Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much
ohhhhh that explains why u couldnt update me... hmmm... anyways i have a bad feeling about this party... a rly bad feeling... reading on :)
Author
Reply
Yeah, sorry!
oh god she lost the freakin mask. holy shit.
Author
Reply
She's in trouble now, huh?(:
omgoodness!!! :O reading on :P boy i need to catch up. Badly.
Author
Reply
Yessir you do!(:
Awesome! Keep me Updated!
Author
Reply
Thanks I will!
Im still pissed that u never updated me, but i still enjoy this story, I miss Superman.
Author
Reply
I'm sorry!
u. never. updated. me. how mean :(
Author
Reply
I'm sorry D:
Booksie Popular Content
-
Shelves: 53
-
Shelves: 15
-
Shelves: 15
Other Content by kissmyoops
Book / Fantasy
Book / Young Adult
Book / Horror
Shubh patidar