Short Story: The Perfect Time

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


What am I to do? I need to feed but I know I cannot for if I do I shall be giving in to my inner demon. I know if that happens I will not be able to stop

but if I do not feed then I shall die. Shall I give in to my inner demon and feed off her? Or shall I leaver her be and go on my way?

I watch her as she walks down the path, all alone. Now would be the best time to strike, now would be the best time to feed while the moon is high in the sky

I approach slowly from behind, not making a sound. She pauses in her step and turns around, looking me in the eyes. Now would be the perfect time

I hold out my hand and hand her a single pure white rose. I nod my head and murmur "for you madame" then with another nod I turn and disappear into the shadows. Now would

be the perect time but sometimes its best to not give in

Submitted: March 11, 2012

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this is really good! It seems to be from a Vampire's point of view right?
I love the way you keep the reader guessing.
Have you thought about making it into a full novel or book? :)

Sun, March 11th, 2012 4:05pm


Im not quite sure what creature the main character is lol but I am thinking of extending it into a short story. Thank you for reading it ^^

Sun, March 11th, 2012 12:59pm

Art _91

I remember this! XD

Sun, March 11th, 2012 8:01pm


lmao I bet you do ;)

Mon, March 12th, 2012 5:16am

Ian Dawn

Love teh idea of restraint and beauty not my fortay I jump in and kill. well done Kit

Tue, March 13th, 2012 1:02am


lmao thanks Ian ^^

Tue, March 13th, 2012 5:07am


I SO REMEMBER THIS EPIC AND SUSPENSEFUL WRITING!!!!! still leaving me in suspense with everything you write. I have never before met anyone that could do that in tales of genre you write. I give my respect for you mate.

Thu, March 15th, 2012 3:14pm


Haha really pt? I'm honored ^^ *bows*

Thu, March 15th, 2012 11:49am


nice little snippet of a story you have here, very mysterious. i like it

Thu, April 19th, 2012 5:00pm


Thank you :)

Thu, April 19th, 2012 10:57am

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