What Do You Do When You're in Pain?
Poem by: Kitaramitsui
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What do you do when you can't cry anymore?
What do you do when you can't love yourself anymore?
What do you do when you can't trust yourself?
What do you do when you can't trust those around you?
What do you do when you just give up?
What do you do when you just stop trying?
What do you do when you have no one to go to?
What do you do when you have no where to go?
What do you do when you find that you have no will to live?
What do you do when you find that you have no reason to live?
What do you do when you realize that you lost everything?
What do you do when you feel like your whole world is falling apart around you?
What do you do when you feel like you cant do anything right?
What do you do when you feel like you are all alone?
What do you do when you feel like no one cares?
What do you do when you don't know what to do anymore?
What do you do when you don't know who to trust?
What do you do when you don't know where to go?
Submitted: October 27, 2011
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That was very good, very emotional. I liked it, nice job!!
Sat, November 5th, 2011 10:50pmwell, i completely understand because i'm going through something similar. i hope it gets better for you
Sat, November 5th, 2011 10:52pminteresting poem, i do like how its all in questions, makes it different. nice one
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TwoStepz
I loved the simplicity of this poem. The repetition of the question 'what do you do when?' added effect to it too. It makes the reader question themselves about what they would do if they were in that position in their life.
Thu, October 27th, 2011 6:14pmNicely written and thought out!
Keep writing!
TwoStepz!
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Thanks!!
Thu, October 27th, 2011 11:16am