As Long As He's Here

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I literally JUST wrote this, and it's very personal :) So please Comment, like, whatever--and let me know what you think!! THANKS

Crying

Searching

Fighting

Hoping

Dying to find a home.

Looking towards the light, but to find no sun

Forever to wander alone.

His smile

His touch

Everything that comes with it

Dying to catch her breath.

The only survivor to ever walk the shadows

Overcoming fatal death.

Wonder

Beauty

Love

Marvel

He welcomes her, so dear

As long as he’s here, she shall not feel demise,

Forever to hold him near.


Submitted: April 02, 2012

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Animal lover

i like the start and repeatism of the words because the make my mind create a picture this is a good technique. i think it didn't flow very well though maybe you could add some rhyming to improve that. good job.
animal lover
xxx

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 5:16pm

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Thanks :)

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 10:01am

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