It's Everyones Summer!...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Summer deserves a Smile!

Let's salute the Summer!

Lets kiss the schools goodbye!

I'll bet that we won't get dumber,

if we turn around with dropless eyes!

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Lets salute the Summer!

Lets for once have fun!

Lets get rid of work filled days!

Lets sit in the Summer Sun!

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Lets run in summer rain!

Lets pick a few flowers here and there!

Lets jump into the pool!

Lets get all these done befor summer ends and we go back to school!

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Some of us don't have the time...

Some of us can't sit and ryme.

Some of us have worried heads.

Some of us just need a bed.

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Some of us wish to sleep well,

to get away from living hell,

and some of may have even tried

to commit pure suicide

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Some think that life is bland

Some think that we don't understand

how hard they had to work

to get to breathe and smirk.

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But let's make this one point clear

Summer has come! It's Here!

And even if it's for a while..

Summer deserves at least a smile.

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Submitted: June 05, 2008

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Sameera1127

Diz iz not funny. NOT ONE BIT!!!!!! But i still like (wat am i saying..i have 2 say dat cauze ur my best friend.)

Thu, June 5th, 2008 4:12pm

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????

Thu, June 5th, 2008 10:27am

Pratibha

Some think that life is bland

Some think that we don't understand

how hard they had to work

to get to breathe and smirk.

This is BRILLIANT....lovely and cute....*smiling*

Thu, June 5th, 2008 10:44pm

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THANKS!!!

Fri, June 6th, 2008 5:49pm

mystory

Very nice poem. Very colorful! ^^ Haha. well, summer is coloful like that. And so amazingly hot! DX

Sat, June 7th, 2008 1:19am

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umm...hmmm...

Fri, June 6th, 2008 6:49pm

DarkRider

liked the second half...

Sat, June 7th, 2008 1:46am

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uh...thanks!

Fri, June 6th, 2008 6:49pm

Isabelle08

Wondeful!! LOVE IT

Sat, June 7th, 2008 12:20pm

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YAY:)

Tue, June 10th, 2008 10:25am

jewelfish14

yah for summer, LOVE the poem, it made me smile to

Sat, June 7th, 2008 2:08pm

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YAY! that was why i wrote it!

Tue, June 10th, 2008 10:27am

Raya

nice poem.I love summer.

Sat, June 7th, 2008 9:43pm

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Thanks! I do too!

Mon, June 9th, 2008 9:07pm

Flying Piggy

I like it a lot! Good job! :)

Sun, June 8th, 2008 1:13am

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Thanks!

Mon, June 9th, 2008 8:58pm

lexie

rhymey:) i likey it. its so cute as Punishment said. it makes me feel young again!!!
haha, i'm so happy. i'll read it again!!! ::))

Thu, June 12th, 2008 5:25pm

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YAY :*)

Thu, June 12th, 2008 11:23am

Jacobella22

Good poem, Kitty08. Loved it!!

Sat, June 14th, 2008 6:27am

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Thanks!

Sat, June 14th, 2008 2:34pm

Wandiola

ha ha!! XD this is funny!! some people thought of commitng pur suiside!!! well then!!

BUT SCHOOL DOES THAT TO YOU LIKE!!!!
OMG!!
ha xx great poem!

Thu, June 19th, 2008 4:26pm

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Thanks:)

Sat, June 21st, 2008 7:08am

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