Here They Lie but They No Longer Rest

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A girl whose demons use to rest but they no longer rest.

Wings that came,

no longer come.

Happiness once here

now lost in the passage of time.

Anger that should have never appeared

now here resides.

Wars have started,

allegiances made,

but who should I chose?

Life or death.


Submitted: March 14, 2009

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FairyWings

I could sense the hatred in this poem. By demons, I supposed you meant the hate for humanity in causing a war? I hope i'm right. Anyways, I liked the ending very much. The choice left a deep impression on the reader. ^.^

Fri, April 24th, 2009 2:18am

laila

Very very deep, full of feeling! I'm full of admiration at the way you chose your words :) You'll make a great poet :)

Fri, April 24th, 2009 9:09am

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Thanks, I hope you enjoyed it.

Fri, April 24th, 2009 6:07am

vampirealice94

AWWW...I just adored this, so much meaning in so little words :)
xoxo, vampirealice94

Sat, April 25th, 2009 1:55pm

vampirealice94

BTW: I love the title!!!! Just noticed :D
xoxo, vampirealice94

Mon, May 4th, 2009 4:33pm

Jessica George

I like how its short, simply yet very deep and raw with emotion. You've got talent! nice job!

.:XxJessxX:.

Fri, July 10th, 2009 2:08pm

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Thanks =]

Fri, July 10th, 2009 7:58am

Casey Michelle Silver

this is really good i love it
Peace and Love Casey Michelle Silver

Fri, July 17th, 2009 6:00am

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Thanks =]

Fri, July 17th, 2009 4:32am

Gadzookziie Spice 99

i love it
the title is cool too :)

Sun, July 26th, 2009 3:57pm

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=] thanks

Sun, July 26th, 2009 10:25am

Perdurable Entity

Nice and devels deep into the ultimate question, I like it not bad for the first poem i have read on this site. :)

Riley Walker.......

Tue, October 20th, 2009 5:37am

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Thnxs =]

Tue, October 20th, 2009 3:28am

Nacre Aura

Nice...i like ur style. Small poems and easy to understand...

Wed, October 28th, 2009 2:00pm

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Thnxs =)

Wed, October 28th, 2009 1:19pm

NazireC

hm, this was a nice little treat in the morning. I like your somber mood, and I like short but direct approach to your poetry.
Like the usage of passage of time in your poem!

Tue, November 24th, 2009 1:06pm

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Thanks, I actually did this after I finished a test... Guess that's why it sounds somber XP

Tue, November 24th, 2009 3:46pm

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