My Beautiful Dark Huntress

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A huntress and a demon meant to kill each other, but will they find love among all the rivalry?

Out of the forest she comes, a dark huntress. Looking, searching, having to kill. She is tall, pale, and slender in her midnight black gown. Her upper lip red as freshly spilled blood, while her lower lip is painted black as the shadows of night. In this cold barren world she is the warm, pale moonlight, yet she is also the dark new moon. Her eyes, so peculiar, all is wholly black, almost. Those beautiful eyes have white bright vines, twisting and turning. Her hair a midnight black raven's whing. In both her hands, her long sharp fingernails all black, except for the middle ones, they are as red as her upper lips. The black painted and adorned with vines of red, while the red ones with black vines. Her white teeth that are also decorated with black vines on them, grow sharp insincers, either mad or happy.

Her beautiful feet have nothing but bracelets adorning her ankles all around to her feet. In her right hand she carries a sword, tall, pale, and beautiful as she. Meant for me to be slained, but I melt her with a touch. When she is happy black and red roses grow around her, though plain in comparison to her, they are still beautiful.

  You see, her face shows nothing, but when she is happy roses grow; she always smells of them. Ah, my beautiful huntress. When angry lightening will strike, when she sees me it begins to snow and she smiles for a second, but disappears quickly. She sees me and raises her sword, but the roses grow. We have known one another body, mind, and soul; I raise my dark, dark, black sword. She raises her light, light, white sword. The wind is around her, this,  however, does not surprise me. The wind is always protecting her, always with her.The shadows rises behind me. We fight.

Eros has played a cruel joke on both of us. Each of us. Each of us was weakened one night; tired, and weary. As I was about to do the killing blow, I hestitated. She took the chance, but hestitated as well. We saw each other for long moments of time, breathing hard. Then as if we practiced threw our swords and I opened my arms as she fell in them.

"I cannot live without you my love." She said. I repeated it. Now we fight out of enjoyment, to let our natures out for a while.

  She throws her sword, smiles and kisses me. We were made to kill one another, enemies, hatered to one another. But Eros did us a favor, stopped us from a useless boring existence, to an exicting life. Passion to one another, lover, love to one another.

We cannot live with one another, but we cannot live without one another. My beautiful, pale, dark huntress. You will be the death of me, but you are the life of mine. She looks at me as I got her hands in mine, the wind blowing and, more importantly, red and black roses growing in a rapid rate around her. "I love you, my love and life," her lips tell me. I kiss her as my response.

Submitted: March 18, 2009

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This is very good. The description of the huntress is amazing, I can actually picture her, great job!

Wed, April 22nd, 2009 4:38pm


Beautiful description you've got. I could just imagine everything happening in front of my eyes. I totally liked the way you've used Eros in your text. It was very apt to use Eros to explain the desires between the two enemies. Great job!

Fri, April 24th, 2009 2:21am


Yeah, I love to add a lot of stuff, which sometimes worry's me if somebody isn't getting bored.
*shrugs* oh well what can one do.

Fri, April 24th, 2009 7:53am


OMG! That is amazing. I'm speechless.

Sat, April 25th, 2009 6:10pm


In a good way? Thanks I am happy I could leave you speechless.

Sat, April 25th, 2009 11:36am

yuu shindemura

a very dark passion play! your story is so gothic, i approve its total blackened aura. ;) nice! me like it. ;p

Wed, April 29th, 2009 4:30pm


Thanks I do love dark things.

Wed, April 29th, 2009 12:02pm



Sat, May 2nd, 2009 12:55am


Yep, 100 percent gothic baby. If you read my bio you'll be able to see that. But I love all things dark, and weird, and random.

Fri, May 1st, 2009 6:11pm


Ohhhhh! So darkly sensual.. Love the description!

Angellynn :D

Sat, May 2nd, 2009 6:20pm


Thanks I glad you like it.

Sat, May 2nd, 2009 11:36am

Robyn Kenley

Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Super AMAZING! It's like Ying and Yang almost except with a huntress and a demon!

Sun, May 3rd, 2009 1:43am


Thanks I've never thought of it that way.
Thanks for the comment.

Sat, May 2nd, 2009 9:16pm


Beautifully descriptive, and charmingly poetic. I loved every word of it. My favorite part:

"When she is happy black and red roses grow around her, though plain in comparison to her, they are still beautiful."

Excellent work. I'm a fan. =)

Tue, May 5th, 2009 1:28am


thanks. =^_^=

Tue, May 5th, 2009 4:24am


My God... This is soooo beautiful. I've read such a charming story after a looong time. Descriptions are superb. This is stunningly magical :)

Tue, May 5th, 2009 8:34am


I liked that! I can feel the emotion running! keep it up!!

Thu, May 7th, 2009 1:48pm


This is amazing. I love the way that you write. Please comment on my stuff.

Sat, May 9th, 2009 8:38pm


Ok I will and thnxs for the comment.

Mon, May 11th, 2009 6:30am


wow! that was amazing! really good!

Sun, May 10th, 2009 7:22pm


That was very deep and beautiful, I truly enjoyed reading it. :-)

Mon, May 11th, 2009 8:15am


Glad you enjoyed it. =^_^=

Mon, May 11th, 2009 6:29am

muses of eternity

oooo that was amazing! extraordinary detail!!

Tue, May 12th, 2009 6:17am


aww this is very sweet i like it

Fri, May 15th, 2009 7:52pm


Thnxs, a lot of people seem to like it. =)
Thanks for the comment.

Fri, May 15th, 2009 1:04pm


Wow! So beautiful! While reading this it reminded me of a long, but amazing poem. Great Job! 10 out 10 for sure!

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 6:35pm


Thnxs your so kind. =^_^=

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 1:35pm


wow, loved it!! shes like a goth vampire, hehe, the ending was great!! so romantic, and beautifuly dark! :)

Sat, May 23rd, 2009 8:45pm

Miss Moon

words could not describe how much i love this!
please keep me updated on your work ^__^

Sat, May 30th, 2009 12:55am


I will, thnxs.

Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:24am


Oh my god...this looks like my story so much...a prohibited love! perfect!

Wed, June 3rd, 2009 4:09pm

burn to death

it's wonderfull , iread it and i live in it
it's like a world of fiction
love it

Fri, July 3rd, 2009 3:21pm


Thnxs =]

Glad you liked it.

Fri, July 3rd, 2009 8:49am

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