Ghosty Girl

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This story talks about how a girl dies and is trapped, until another person meets her, in a spiritual/paranormal sense. Like the living meets the afterlife.

To me it's kind of like the girl that dies and becomes a ghost, then meets herself when she was living and she sets herself free - (if that makes any sense) just in a weird kind of way I don't really understand it, but you can perceive it any way you want.

Maybe my brain just a little tilted...

 

 

Ghostygirl  by, Rachael Facteau 2012

A

Girl sits, staring into the distance

She sees her life flash before her, then

She is dead

Ghost sits, waiting, waiting to be heard,

Wanting comfort, answers, freedom

A

Girl enters the room, and sits in silence

Listening, her head tilts towards a sound,

A

Ghosty girl in now in the room, 

She softly cries, weeping, she is so sad

A

Girl hears the sadness, and reaches out

Her fingers feel coldness, and feels sad herself

Ghost just touched the living, now she can go on,

No more waiting, she is free

Girl leaves the room,

Now, empty.

 
 
 


Submitted: July 02, 2012

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Kittyinatree

Thanks so much and sure thing! : )

Wed, July 4th, 2012 9:48pm

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