A man down

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I was with someone who i had loved alot but later on she broke up with me and it felt like she ripped my heart right from my chest...

There's a man down in the center of the crowd..

Nobody's paying attention to him, they're all letting him die..

They watched her as she reached into his chest and ripped out his heart..

They didn't mind, they kept going with their day..

As he layed there crying and begging for someone to lend him a hand..

But no one helped, nobody even tried..

And within minutes i died...

Submitted: December 27, 2011

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oh my god this is heart breaking i love ur poems;)

Tue, December 27th, 2011 3:08am

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thank you

Tue, December 27th, 2011 5:39am

O-O Whoa. This. Is. Good. XDDD Well done!

Wed, December 28th, 2011 5:43pm

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