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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just open your eyes. You might be surprised at what you see.

How blind can a young man be?
How can the young girl not see?
Time is changing

He doesn’t seem to know what’s right in front of him

She always dreams of something more
If he sacrificed a little
He could find the light
If she opened her eyes
She would no longer need to dream
For the dark is finally gone
Tame the beast but do not break it
Tend the flower but do not drown it
Let nature take its course
And paths will cross
The young man
No longer blind
Finally sees the skies
The young girl
That now sees
Has finally found the dream
The beast is gentle but still with spirit
The flower is now perfectly in bloom
Two no longer blind
Now let’s work on the rest of the world

Submitted: January 21, 2009

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Lovely :)
so the messege to me is that there are little things in the world that can be fixed but we should also get to the others in life. though they are not easy becuase we can not see them but just feel them through our minds and emotionally resolve it, before they become out of our reach......right? well everyone picks up a different moral frome everything, because of the way our minds work and the experiences we'd have in our lives


Fri, January 23rd, 2009 2:49am

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