A life by Hate

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is a quick poem about seeing the world through hatred

~~Hate
Oh what a life to live by hate,
You try to stay positive, see the world as before,
See the world as a child,
Where hate does not exist,
But alas, you are grown,
You realize all the hate the world contains,
Stay positive, you tell yourself,
But in all good time, you will fail,
Hate will be there waiting,
And when you give up,
Your soul will be encrusted with the red power.
 


Submitted: December 17, 2014

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Sahar Ahmad

I love it! So gentle and it is having such a great flow. Lovely poem with a deep meaning! Yes! The world is filled with hate. And I hate the world Lol :D

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 11:47am

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thanks for the comment

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 11:51am

Sahar Ahmad

Hey! And I forgot to say KMU!! And keep an eye on your comment box! ;)

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 11:49am

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lol ok thanks and I also post things under MY NEWS when new stuff is ready

Mon, December 22nd, 2014 11:52am

Liam Strong

In a few of my recent works, I've brought up similar mentalities of "hate", and I find it actually kind of interesting, because I love a lot of things, shyly and indirectly. "We end up in love with the hate that binds us, a mutual sludge to keep our bones in position, this moment and every in passing." This is the verse I was thinking of, had to look through my notes. It's almost ironic, your poem in its approach, with such a simple, short poem against an encompassing and cringing topic to many; and you triumphed! There wasn't really a single thing I think the poem needed work on, which is good, because I really enjoyed this! It was a delicious read, as I always say! Haha! Good work! Thanks for sharing!

Mon, June 22nd, 2015 10:59pm

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Again thanks so much I'm glad you liked it

Mon, June 22nd, 2015 5:09pm

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