Kiss it Goodbye Tonight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is about making love. Please read, comment and as always enjoy :)

~~Kiss It Goodbye Tonight

his pastel pink lips ask,
in the dimness of the night,
her crimson lips shake uncontrollably but utter a response
then seeing darkness as she locks her eyes tight
a warm sensation covers her like a thick blanket 
and a new experience of pain is welcomed into her existence
a harsh unnatural feeling,
 worse than the sting of needles injecting her skin,
The seconds travel slower than each fierce breath emerging from the lungs of the pair
abruptly the heat is removed like a fresh raindrop on a summer’s day
she shivers uncontrollably as if he captured all her heat
without warning
a clear substance emerges in her eyes, creating a puddle
and glides down her cheeks furiously
she attempts to disappear from him
not wanting to show her tears
but his hands
through the shadows
uncover her face,
brings her into his open arms,
and lightly kisses her fragile lips
as she realizes what they had done together.


Submitted: June 14, 2014

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darkism

nice one.. greate pieace.. see some of my work too cyaa

Sun, June 22nd, 2014 1:29am

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thanks :)

Sat, June 21st, 2014 6:35pm

darkism

its really dificult to write someting like this. ecpacilay when u try to expres every detail of the story.. sry for my english btww :)

Sun, June 22nd, 2014 1:32am

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that's okay not a problem haha and I don't find it hard to write in general but I agree with you when you talk about all the details thanks :)

Sat, June 21st, 2014 6:37pm

marwah

a poem filled with great emotions... great job

Mon, June 23rd, 2014 9:10am

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Thank you :)

Mon, June 23rd, 2014 8:01am

AnnieBirnie

hello, this poem was so touching, the emotion you have set into it. This is exceptional work from you. This poem almost made me shead a tear. Well done please keep up all the good work. :)~Anniebirnie~:)

Thu, June 26th, 2014 3:07pm

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hello lol, and thank you so much it was pretty easy to write about actually lol

Thu, June 26th, 2014 9:11am

SuzanneE

This is a very emotional poem and totally not what I was expecting. Very well written and I love the different aspect taken on the subject of sex. I would actually be intrigued to find another poem like this from a man's perspective. -Suz

Fri, July 18th, 2014 3:07am

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good idea I will think about writing one like that thanks so much for the read and the comment

Thu, July 17th, 2014 8:27pm

PoeticMe♥

I love all the description and how this poem tells a story. You expressed the emotion so well and I really enjoyed the read. ~Poetic

Tue, July 22nd, 2014 10:59pm

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thanks so much some people are not a fan because its about sex but thanks for reading :)

Tue, July 22nd, 2014 4:32pm

Alex The shadow girl

Amazing poem and all these descriptions made me want to melt. This was beautifully written. :)

Mon, July 28th, 2014 6:16am

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thanks for reading :)

Mon, July 28th, 2014 9:41am

aruntp

interesting poem

Tue, August 12th, 2014 10:50am

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thx

Tue, August 12th, 2014 7:29am

ImaginationParadox

I like this poem I was curious is the girl in the poem having sex for the first time?

Fri, August 22nd, 2014 4:48am

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yes she is

Fri, August 22nd, 2014 11:43am

ImaginationParadox

Its beautiful this poem has inspired me to write some poetry I look forward to reading more of your writings :)

Fri, August 22nd, 2014 9:03pm

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thanks so much

Fri, August 22nd, 2014 3:32pm

The Anonymous Penman

it has just the right balance of pain and pleasure- it's beautifully erotic.

Mon, August 25th, 2014 2:11am

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thank you I love that haha I will read your stuff soon!

Sun, August 24th, 2014 8:35pm

The Anonymous Penman

it has just the right balance of pain and pleasure- it's beautifully erotic.

Mon, August 25th, 2014 3:15pm

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thanks so much :)

Mon, August 25th, 2014 10:06am

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