Death is grim,
so grim you could throw it in the bin,
Death looks like big black wings engulfing me,
But just let it be,
It smells like the darkest, desolate alleyway,
swallowing every hint of day,
It feels like a horrific pin,
pinning me until i burst,
death sounds like a scream,
Making me feel like im walking on a beam,
Death is grim.
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I feel like im starting to get somewhere with my poems. All thankks to FoxGlove
We all start somewhere, your writing will improve.
This poem makes death sound so ugly and relentless!
Thanks for sharing!
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Thats what i thought, it actually surprised me if you think about it
really enjoyed this poem. short and to the point and great metaphors!!! if you like horror you should check out my short story. check out my profile.
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Thankyou and will do
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