Love is amazing and beautiful

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is my first poem so if you

Love is like a fire in our heart,

beating a long like an old rickety cart,

when everthing else buckles,

it just stops and has a chuckle,

love is like the rain on a beautiful summers day,

when the cute little kittens come out to play,

never ever forget,

what love is about,

or just even doupt

because you will just turn around,

and start to pout.



This is my first poem so if you have any constructive critisism please feel free to leave a comment.

Submitted: November 28, 2011

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thankyou twist i also have another poem called flames and ice

Wed, November 30th, 2011 11:58pm

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