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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Religion and Spirituality  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem I wrote to myself about pacing myself

Pace Yourself
YOU can you can pace
you can you can pace yoself today for real foreal
YOU can you can stop and enjoy yo life you can you can right now
YOU can you will soon chill and kill stress
You can you can pace yourself
And And live
Foreal foreal
Yes Live Negro live
Forreal for What fo GOD
You can you can live
You can wait and live too my nigga
Live Pace you can you can
pace yo self and livee and livee longerr
You can foreal fo real And live
Let it Go
 Let that shit go fo real fo real
for eal

Submitted: November 03, 2010

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good one, the repetitions made it sound like more of an echoing song :)

Sun, November 21st, 2010 10:21pm


kool thanks for your comment dude

Fri, November 26th, 2010 2:10am

Nnedi Obasi

this another beautiful poem which i understand it is encouraging.

Sat, July 16th, 2011 3:55pm


Thank you and Greetings and welcome to booksie

Tue, July 19th, 2011 4:02pm

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