Submitted: March 07, 2011
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kraze! i thot you were going clean! whats with the unclean words! you cant mix the two! dont have double standards! the poem sounds like a story, the lines are a bit long can you make them shorter! it doesnt have the vibe i was looking for! i hate to say anything negative about your work! if i dont do that i wont be truthful would i? oh love, i know you can do it!
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Great one
Mon, March 7th, 2011 11:37am