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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

Wild thoughs true

Everything that has something to do with living close to the edge is the norm
 If it is real stupid to me it makes sense to my alter ego the man who loves scars (renfroe)
I don't want to die or get hurt (for the most part) not him he goes out his way to be close to death or the edge.
This world is filled with adventures for crazy ass renfroe drinking starting sh*t all the time.
 The sidewalk is too safe walk in the street and get mad at the cars.
 All of the rules are for "them" the corny muthafuc*as (Bobby Rights) of the world if you ask (renfroe).
To be in the lines is to be in the boring zone (safe) no risk no reward if you ask.
Take a look at the way everybody else is going "try it" sometimes. (nope)
I need to save some money will I nope got to party(?)
Need to walk in a room and not offend anybody (nope)
Split decisions are the norm looks like two people are in control (nope)
Make a new rule and then f**king break it (Yep)
Who is going to win the battle ????

Submitted: March 07, 2011

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Great one

Mon, March 7th, 2011 11:37am


kraze! i thot you were going clean! whats with the unclean words! you cant mix the two! dont have double standards! the poem sounds like a story, the lines are a bit long can you make them shorter! it doesnt have the vibe i was looking for! i hate to say anything negative about your work! if i dont do that i wont be truthful would i? oh love, i know you can do it!

Fri, April 8th, 2011 3:16am


It's good to hear from you Tarry

Fri, April 8th, 2011 1:26am

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