Very hard to see

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

debris

DUSTY
things are dusty and real odd looking for me right now It might be my fault
I hope it isn't because I can see the greatest life in front of me and the worst behind.
Clean I can clean up my mess today without seeing 
I can see. I can see great things for others around me without any fear or worry  or jealousy
which is a great thing. My life is moving it's just so dusty.
There is plenty of life and living for me beyond this this dusty.
 
 
 


Submitted: November 18, 2010

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krazeoak

Great Work

Thu, November 18th, 2010 11:24am

XtreMe me

ohh dude this ws great it had its own style!

Fri, December 3rd, 2010 11:45am

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thanks g i'm glad you got it check out king don't run

Mon, December 6th, 2010 3:50am

Tarry

i can sense and feel your emotions in the poem. i hope whoever you were writing about is nolonger feeling dusty. sure you can clean up.

Thu, January 6th, 2011 6:02am

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yeah this person will one day

Sat, February 5th, 2011 2:50am

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