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fear of losing someone...

When the dark dawns upon me,

I think of you.

It feels comforting,

that its you,

beside me...


Someday you say we'll meet;

and it will not feel new,

because it would be you,

beside me...


So imagine my fright,

when I think, this is not going as it should have;

when i think, you dont belong here with me;

when I think, you would no longer be,

Beside me...!

Submitted: August 03, 2011

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fresh spirits

This is a nice poem and very emotional:)However here are some tip:
1-"that its you" it is better to say"that it is you"because I guess you are confused by using its and it is.
Beside this I liked it.

Wed, August 3rd, 2011 7:19am


thanks a lot! :)

Wed, August 3rd, 2011 12:52am

Frank Ramtahal

In interesting poem narrating the fear in you. Good flow of ideas. I like it. The colour looks great.

Fri, August 5th, 2011 9:27am


Thank you! :)

Fri, August 5th, 2011 6:19pm

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