Drop

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Short thing, wrote it while crying, missing someone like crazy.

Sitting on hard, unfeeling concrete stairs

mascara trails of tears fall down my face

I'm kicking, screaming, fighting with all my strength

to gain some footing and be granted grace.

I know it's just 21 days, three weeks

but my thoughts are clouded by a huanting grief

I feel like without you to talk to

My smile was stolen by the cruelest thief.

Stale cigarette smoke curls

around my fingers and hair.

I hope that those oblivous around me

can feel my heaviness in the air.

But every drop that falls

from hazel green eyes day and night

is worth it to me because it's all for you

and when you're back this will all again turn to light.


Submitted: May 01, 2008

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stephhlebreton

awww, so sweet yet sad. I love it, beautifuly lovely, lol. I am intrigued by you now, expect more of my comments!
Steph:)

Thu, May 1st, 2008 11:35pm

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Thank you so much! I was hoping to make everyone who read it feel heavy hopelessness and quiet hopefulness at the same time. I hope I succeeded!

Fri, May 2nd, 2008 10:30pm

gerabel

I felt the lonelilness quite naturally but also the hope of things to come! A very enjoyable read. Happy writing.....Jerry

Sun, May 4th, 2008 4:18pm

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I'm glad I did what I was trying to do with it...and I'm so glad you found it an enjoyable read!

Sun, May 4th, 2008 10:28am

dubl

this is lovely :]

Sat, May 17th, 2008 4:31pm

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Thank you! It was complete loneliness and despair. I hoped others would feel it. But this tough period is coming to an end--I get to see him in 4 days!! Be prepared for happier poems after that =]

Sat, May 17th, 2008 6:51pm

wikhaiinn

crying oh? oh thats bad... oh not actually but... not good... so what do you mean by huanting grief? XD XD

hmm cool dude XD

did you know that my most favorite words are those that ends with -ous

like oblivious,dubious,etc

oh great expressionism you have :)

Sun, May 18th, 2008 2:11pm

kaylalebreton

awww i luv it going to become a fan of your's :)

Mon, May 19th, 2008 1:33am

Michael68

Great poem Kristen. You really show strong emotions in this piece. I know how it is when you miss someone that much. Thanks for sharing it. Excellent Job. :)

Fri, May 30th, 2008 1:31am

Zia Jaycee

wow descriptive...beautiful even though i know you did not feel beautiful at the time...keep writing from your heart because that is when your best poems come out! :)

Tue, July 8th, 2008 12:17am

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