The final wish

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
It is about a girl who is blind and during from cancer and a angel comes to grant her a final wish

Submitted: June 11, 2012

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Kisa sat looking out her window at the snow covered earth all trees bore no leaves which gave the moon an ominous glow as it peeked through their branches and shone into kisa's window and reflected off her violet eyes which in one looked to be evil but at the same time had something about that seemed pure innocent even angelic in a way she watched as each tiny snowflake slowly made there way from the heavens to the cold desolate earth there was a rustling noise that came from behind her she turned and there stood a tall very beautiful man with long dark black hair that had a bluish shimmer to it as he stood in the moonlight kisa opened her eyes and all way black   Kisa had be blind at birth but ever night she sat at her window and close her eyes and imagined what it would look like if she could see even more then that it was like she could see but only the beauty in the most of evil things she had been doing this for the most of her life now and today was her 15 birthday as she sat alone in her room she wondered if the beautiful man she had seen in her mind was really there or if it was just a fantasy in her mind she stood up and stretched out her are and walked forward slowly waiting to bump into a wall or something but instead she touched cloth silk which was odd never before had she felt her mother nor father wear silk then a hand rested on her shoulder \"kisa what are you doing\" a soft voice of worry said she new this voice all to well it would often call out when she ran into things or fell and was usually followed by a gentle hug or kiss of love \"nothing mother..... Who is in front of me\"she asked quietly kisa rarely talked not even to answer a question or respond to her parents concern there wasa long pause \"no dear your father is at work it's just me and you in the whole house\" her mother replied. With what kisa imaged as a smile then hugged her kisa sighed then made her way back to the window and closed her eyes again she saw snow and the moon as she turned around she saw a beautiful man standing there this time she saw his hand was stretched outward to her and was slowly walking closer to her she backed up as far as she could into the window and opened her eyes saw nothing but blackness then a hand rest on her head\" mom\" she whispered but there was no response back then it was gone she walked and felt her way to the couch then laid down and closed her eyes and feel asleep The next day kisa sat next to her mom and waited on her doctor report from her visit she heard the door close and foot steps crossed the room kisa closed her eyes and saw a tall man with blonde curly hair wearing a long lab coat that drug the ground cause he was so short almost child like even the sleeves had to be pushed up because they were to long and he had rather thick classes around he's neck was a stethoscope and in his had a black paper with white writing and he pulled out a pen and signed her name but the pen wasn't white it was red and dripped out the pen and on to the paper like what she imagined blooded to look like she opened her eyes and listened\" may I talk to u\" he said kisa figured that he ment her mother and her guess was proven correct as the door shut behind footsteps then several minutes later the door opened and more footsteps but this time there was more then just that it seemed as if she heard sobbing but it was very faint then the doctor spoke \" well that's all for to day I'll see u later\" he said as he helped her up and out the door on The way home kisa heard more sobbing but more loud and painful not physical though emotional 


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