i miss u and its all your fault

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

just some how i felt after my boyfriend broke up with me...its kinda thoughts....lol..

I miss you so much

My heart died tonight

The sun shines real bright
But I can’t feel its warmth
For once in my life
I used to see colours
Now all I see is dullness
I miss it when you held me
I haven’t smiled since then
You took my breath away
Now I’m waiting to move on
Cos somewhere along the line
You gave up on the only person
 Who wouldn’t ever give up on you
I’m wasting away
All thanks to you
What did I get myself into
I found myself trusting
When I never had before
Didn’t I learn the first time?
I can’t trust anyone but myself
You gave me butterflies
You swept me off my feet
But you went and killed those butterflies
And place me back on the ground
Unfortunately those butterflies were deadly
And you placed me in an earthquake
I fell to the ground
But there was no one to catch me
The earth opened up and swallowed me whole
Now I’m stuck somewhere between earth and hell
I see you with her
The other girl
She makes you happy
That I can see
But for some reason I still love you
I wish the feeling would fade
Then I could move on
Onto the better part of life
But I gave you my heart
It was yours to keep
You should have looked after it
But instead you pulled it apart
Just like you would a weed
I hope that someone finds it
And helps it to blossom again
But until that day comes
I’m gonna be dead inside
I just hope with all my black soul
That it’s found quickly
While I still have a spark of life
In my body…

Submitted: December 24, 2009

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Brian W

It is hard when someone rips your heart apart. Your words descibe the feelings well. I could feel your saddness and pain when reading this. Well written.
PS: I hope your heart mends soon

Thu, December 24th, 2009 12:40am


thankyou. its actually the first poem i have ever written.

Wed, December 23rd, 2009 4:55pm

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