Open Door (An Invitation)

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Eyes as windows to the soul.Words as pages of the book we turn,My thoughts, my fears, and desires ...everything I am

The depths of me and this is an open door ,if you are of the mind to find out more

Eyes as windows to the soul.
Words as pages of the book we turn
The flame from within sometymes afraid to burn...
People's perception, Reality's deception
Misconception
I dont know anyrhing for sure.
But I discovered a book that I would like to learn
My mind is open, as is your book
I invite you to take a closer look
My words may well be a door and quite possibly more than you are looking for.
I wasn't . Im not but I would and I could...
My only intent was to be understood,
Perhaps this existence escapes understanding
One foot forward, up in the air, fall flat on my face
Am I taking off or fumbling my landing?
My thoughts, my fears, and desires ...
Everything I am,
I share from the start.
Perhaps not yet realized;
Keys to my heart and secrets of this soul within.
This is how I'd like to begin.
The depths of me and this is an open door ,
If you are of the mind to find out more

Submitted: September 01, 2007

Poetry poetry self invitation to friendship introduction

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EdwardJBradleySr

krptdnacnce:

Most interesting! Think it would benefit from a more poetic formatting and presentation. This may be due to an incompatibility between Booksie and your own word-processing software. This can be addressed through the "edit" feature on your Booksie Publishing Center. You may have to re-key the entire poem to get the presentation you would like.

Gave it a "5" as it has potential and to give some encouragement. To others to read it and to yourself to reformat it for a clearer presentation. And to post more of your work.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sat, September 1st, 2007 2:12am

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Mr. Edward Bradley Sr.,
Thank you for your recent visit and rating. It is most appreciated and will be reciprocated as well. At the moment you were leaving comment, I was in the "editing" department for my thoughts mirrored yours, and just as we both thought, the changed presentation provides easier viewing. Thank you again. I did visit your works just have not decided which peice to comment on so I will be back. Love and light/TT

Sat, September 1st, 2007 11:29am