He doesn't love her

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is about my friend caleb, im madly inlove with him but he is inlove with another girl, so to get these bad feelings out I wrote this poem.

He doesn't love her

Not all love stories

has a happy ending

a couple together forever,

or happieness.

 

This story in particular,

has to do with love,

and the fact that one quiet girl

loves a guy who loves someone else.

 

In this story she was happy,

the best that can be,

but once Jamie came along,

he left her side.

 

All she could think is,

"Does he really love me?

Does he really care,

because once im gone,

he will never be there.

 

Sorrowful she sits, 

in an empty room,

seeking for relief,

of the pain she has.

 

Maybe he will come,

maybe not,

but until then,

Im in one big giant knot.

 


Submitted: April 11, 2014

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Burning Pen

I like the story being told in this poem , it really activates our imagination . Good job

Fri, April 11th, 2014 6:29pm

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thanks :)

Sat, April 12th, 2014 9:51pm

Jasmine Brown

wow..... creative...

Sat, April 12th, 2014 12:17pm

Jasmine Brown

wow..... creative...

Sat, April 12th, 2014 12:18pm

Jasmine Brown

wow..... creative...

Sat, April 12th, 2014 12:18pm

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