ghost of past


Ghost Of Your Past
Love of my life,
I stand in the background
Through your ups and downs,
Your winning and losing
Your dark nights
And waking hells.
Love of my life
I think of you with kindness
Although you left me
I know you suffered
And died a death
When you remembered
Love of my life
My arms were waiting
And would have done through the torment
Of what we let slip away
Till the end days
What infinite sadness
What total lack of courage
What misplaced bravery I saw in you
What pain and suffering
You and your “loving”
Put me through.

Submitted: May 25, 2012

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Love the srtucture, and love the emotion you put in this poem. fanatasy it should not be, this is real even if lived in a fantasy. great job and welcome to Booksie. Keep em comming, never stop beliving- Nel

Fri, May 25th, 2012 4:40pm

krystal magdelen

thanks alot!! :)

Sat, May 26th, 2012 3:01pm


good work sis..keep it up

Sat, May 26th, 2012 6:13pm


thank u bhaiya !! :) :)
n ya thnks a ton 4 suggesting m dis site !! :) :)

Sun, May 27th, 2012 5:12am


really nice poem, written beautifully. I like it

Mon, May 28th, 2012 12:14pm


thanx alot!! :) :)

Mon, May 28th, 2012 6:54am

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