The Rainbow Pendulum
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Poem by: Kuatsimoto
Tick-tock the pendulum swings.
The rainbow is there
Clear as day
Looming in the distance
So close
So close
Tick-tock the pendulum swings
Tick-tock the pendulum swings.
The colors are bright
They draw you in
You reach out
So close
So close
Tick-tock the pendulum swings
Tick-tock the pendulum swings.
The road is ahead
Twisted
Corrupt
So close
So close
Tick-tock the pendulum swings
Tick-tock the pendulum swings.
Twisting path
The colors swirl
The fight for balance
So close
So close
Tick-tock the pendulum swings
Tick-tock the pendulum swings.
End of the road
Balance regained
The rainbow so close
Is so far
So far.
Tick- the pendulum stops.
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Comments
ahh another piece that i can say is definantly unique, i loved how you kept the verses short and simple, very well done, its almost lyrical when i read the lines tick tock the pendulum swings and so on, i find it very hard to critisise people but if i do it will hopefyull help, nothing wrong with this tho well done im liking your work!!!
Author
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Thank You. I try to make my poes sound lyrical, almost musical. I think tha that is the soul of a poem.
Unknown
Very surreal, the use of colour was beautiful. A rhythmic song of the pendulum, much like our lives :D
Great job!
Author
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Thank you lionheart!
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