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this poem is dedicated to the campaigns against women abuse all over the world. love your women and treat them right!

What did we do wrong?
Where did we go wrong?
What didn’t we do for you?
Why did you intend to treat us like that?
You disgrace us at the least mistake we make.
When there’s no child, you blame us alone.
You beat us when you see us with other men.
Till there’s miscarriage when there’s pregnancy.
Punch bruises all over our faces. You destroy our beauty.
Why do you intend to destroy us?
When there are a lot of things we can do with our lives.
There are a lot of other men out there longing for us.
But you, you have us. Free of charge.
Not by your might or power.
And you treat us the way you like.
You treat us like dirt, filth. Absolutely worthless
Do you know where we might have been if it weren’t you?
We sit in your kitchen, cook and do all sorts of donkey jobs.
And yet you don’t give a damn about us!
We wanna see a change!
We really do wanna see a change!

Submitted: September 14, 2009

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wow i loved it and it is soo soo very true:D Great Job:)

Mon, September 14th, 2009 12:27pm


thanks pal. thank you for joining the campaign.

Mon, September 14th, 2009 7:07am

Naomi Taylor

ohhh so true! women abuse is very wrong and definitely not neccesary! if only people did more about it... i heard in India that women are treated very poorly. stories such as these are very sad and should be stopped! thanks for this awesome poem and good luck to u on the campaign! ???

Tue, September 15th, 2009 8:31pm


thank you for joining the campaign. appreciate your inspiration. goodluck also!

Thu, September 17th, 2009 4:01am


Inspirational words.
We do want a change, but more than that we deserve a change. We are equals and we should be treated with respect not abuse.
I think you did an excellent job expressing your words and feeling through this poem and I, for one, would like to sing your praise for standing up and promoting Women's rights!!!
Excellent poem!!!

Thu, September 17th, 2009 11:47am


am very happy pal. am very grateful that you've recognized the need for treating women with respect and humanity. you're welcome to this campaign. we'll not give up or remain silent on this issue until we see a change.

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 5:16am

Richa Gupta

speechless ....u r 100% right ....LADIES DESERVE A CHANGE

Mon, September 28th, 2009 11:58am


thanks pal. i wish you good health and prosperity!

Mon, September 28th, 2009 5:11am



Most excellently well written. Most compelling theme. Great job. Hops it works.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Well deserved.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Tue, September 29th, 2009 12:02am


thanks pal. am very much overwhelmed. goodluck and all the best!

Tue, September 29th, 2009 7:20am


good job on it hon..whats sad is that is going on in the world today..

Tue, September 29th, 2009 1:40am


thank you very much. am happy that you recognize the fight against women abuse as a necessity that we all have a responsibility to play. goodluck!

Tue, September 29th, 2009 7:08am


tat ws heart wrenching ....i ws touched :)

Mon, November 2nd, 2009 3:49pm


thanks pal. am happy to have you on my fan list.

Tue, November 3rd, 2009 7:09am


I agree with you 100%. Being an abused person myself. I can relate to this in all honesty. Keep up the good work.


Mon, November 9th, 2009 2:10am


thank you very much! I wish you good health and all the best in your endeavors.

Mon, November 9th, 2009 8:17am

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