I walk with sorrow
smile with gloomy face
I hated by all
so life became a race
I wanted remove tears
from everyone's eyes
but I've got a fear
if they stole tear from mine
I also have feeling
that called dreams
people ignored them
nothing will change if i scream
I feel lonely sitting in a park
what happen if
i live in dark
I wanna break my silence
but people won't take it right
they will think it's my violence
people says I don't have heart
but I say what's wrong in it
I know it always got hurt
Submitted: October 05, 2014
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Kenisha Liyanage
Your poem needs a bit more emotions. You know, let out his emotions so that the reader can feel it. But as this is the first poem, I think it's good.
Mon, October 6th, 2014 6:10amAuthor
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thank you very much !!!! you know what you are really nice .thanks :)
Sun, October 5th, 2014 11:37pm