vampire's sorrow

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's about how a vampire feels lonely.

I walk with sorrow

smile with gloomy face

I hated by all

so life became a race

I wanted remove tears

from everyone's eyes

but I've got a fear

if they stole tear from mine

I also have feeling

that called dreams

people ignored them

nothing will change if i scream

I feel lonely sitting in a park

what happen if

i live in dark

I wanna break my silence

but people won't take it right

they will think it's my violence

people says I don't have heart

but I say what's wrong in it

I know it always got hurt

Submitted: October 05, 2014

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Kenisha Liyanage

Your poem needs a bit more emotions. You know, let out his emotions so that the reader can feel it. But as this is the first poem, I think it's good.

Mon, October 6th, 2014 6:10am


thank you very much !!!! you know what you are really nice .thanks :)

Sun, October 5th, 2014 11:37pm

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