drama artist

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

story of a small young ambitious artist whos desire to perform in a drama auditorium

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It is a story of suryam a engineer , coming after school studies , he shifed to town to do intermediate where he scored distinction marks then qualifying in eamcet he joined engineering in computers while studying he got a chance to perform in stage in a small role he did it successfully. It is tradition in his village in every festival ocassion in that place they used to conduct some dramas . He along with his friends decided to play the drama in that contest . So thought about it finally they made rehearsals and played the drama the main concept of their drama is the economic recession and the swine flue that is the main concept and what people have to do if they are effected by the swineflue bringing the awareness among the people about cleaniness , sanitation , hygiene and after their performance every one congratulated him and his friends and asked him to try in film industry. So finally he went to metropolitan city insearch of his carrer in film industry , he approached lot of directors and many persons relating to film industry but no one gave him anychance in film making, so finally he came to know that it is not possibe to get a chance in film industry unless having the reference of the familar person but in this busy world we have no time to care ourself who is going to give him reference . That is million dollar question he finally he came back ( peeche mood ) . He told about his problem and experience to his friends and they told him to marry first and then later try in his interested field, he thought about it seriously and finally he decided to marry a cyber wife who can make him survive in this great recession after marriagehis problem was solved and every one has doubt what this poor suryam whas doing now , he is happy listening to the songs of Mukesh, how nice isnt it .


Submitted: June 01, 2009

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tammanna

good effort...but it was a bit confusing...perhaps the lack of spaces between the words ...

Mon, June 1st, 2009 1:31pm

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sure and i will make it clear in my next article , thanks anyway

Mon, June 1st, 2009 6:38am

Helena Parris

I'm sorry, the writer of Alive and Kicking is SharonRose. Check it out.

Mon, June 1st, 2009 3:01pm

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hi definetly next time i will write in clear way one can understand it very easily . Thanks for giving reply

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 5:52am

writerkc

A tad confusing at parts, and some run ons, but good overall!

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 7:17pm

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hi thanks for reading my short story and expressing your views and you wont be confused in my next article

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 8:57pm

Lady Elizabeth

Sorry, not my cup of tea. I agree with the others as well in that this seems like a summary as opposed to a story.

Fri, July 24th, 2009 2:02pm

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thanks for reading my short story and giving your views in my next article definitely you will have nice peg of kick .

Mon, December 7th, 2009 5:49am

bimbobunny

i think rather than putting "and" in a sentence so many times, you should cut them up and put them into several sentences. That way its less confusing. :D

Thu, July 30th, 2009 6:51am

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sure, how is my story did u enjoyed it

Thu, July 30th, 2009 11:59pm

Jazzie

I enjoyed it, but it seemed more like a summary. I think it would be an amazing story if you gave it a little more detail and added some surprises.

Tue, August 4th, 2009 3:40pm

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thanks for reading story, i will try it in my next article .

Tue, August 4th, 2009 8:40pm

kimi

A very good,realistic storyline.Somewhat,that story repeats itself again and again throughout India.
But you need to improve your narration.next time I hope to spend atleast ten minutes,reading your short story.I hope you got my point.LOL...

Fri, September 4th, 2009 7:22am

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thanks for reading my short story and giving comments

Sat, September 5th, 2009 6:01am

SunsetDreamer

There were a few grammar and spelling errors. I agree with the other readers, it was confusing. Great start so far but didn't really catch my attention and I sort of lost interest. I'd love to see where this is going though so update me!

Sat, December 5th, 2009 4:46am

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its a routine boring story in some places whether we have to agree it what i mean to say is some times minus multiplied by minus gives plus so like that when we are in boring mood reading boring stories like this gives more energy to recharge ourselves.

Fri, March 12th, 2010 5:55am

Wingsword

I agree with many of the comments above me so far. There are a few grammatical errors that need to be fixed; sorry for repeating it, but it tends to bother me... ^_^"
Also, the reason there are short stories is to write out the story, but here it just looks like you're showing it to us. Show, don't tell. It seems promising, but I think it would be nice if you actually tried to write out the short story. :)

Sun, April 4th, 2010 11:06pm

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grammar errors means we were taught English like that so we have to write in that fashion ,wings whether you like it or not its not the matter from my point of view you have to give importance only to the basic content of the story .Thanks for giving reply wings

Mon, April 5th, 2010 5:04am

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