>BITTER LOVE

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

When you love someone and the person doesn't love you back...

Here she comes
As i stand from afar and watch her
Moving with such grace like a dancer
To the tunes of my heartbeat
Her smile so wide and true
And as i trace her smile to her lips
Mine yearns for a touch
Her dimples,completes her beauty
Her sight alone arouses passion in me
Her presence makes me the opposite of who i am
My  heart skips it beat to move with hers
Her beauty so rare i can't describe
So lovely and adorable
But she doesn't notice me as much as i do
She doesn't have those sleepless nights thinking of me
She doesnt blush when i stare in her eyes
She is not of royalty but she is my Queen
And it hurts that she sees me only as a servant.


Submitted: October 22, 2011

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TwoStepz

I love the term 'Servant' and 'Queen'. It makes you think and see it in that way exactly, though you know it is a metaphor really!

TwoStepz!!x

Sat, October 22nd, 2011 6:23pm

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thanks :)

Sat, October 22nd, 2011 3:20pm

akshayjain

wow, really sad!

Tue, October 25th, 2011 7:20am

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:(

Tue, October 25th, 2011 4:37am

ashi17

Beautifully written love poem, like each bite of it. Only thing that strick to me as capital letter in 1st line moving 'M' in moving, 6th line 'M' in mine and small i for 'I'...... is it your any experimental style or typo mistake ?
Over all enjoyed reading it, good work !!

Wed, January 9th, 2013 1:04pm

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Thankx

Tue, December 31st, 2013 1:56am

The Blessed Poet

Interesting but good.

Sun, April 14th, 2013 4:20pm

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Thanks my friend. It's a moral boost when it comes from a talented person like you :)

Sun, April 14th, 2013 9:20am

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