Poem by: L A Gardner
love, heart broken
Submitted: April 22, 2008
hold my heart closely
to protect it
but you can have it
if you want
it's yours anyway . . .
© Copyright 2016 L A Gardner. All rights reserved.
hi! la. when can i've it (i.e. ur heart!) ha! haa!! haaa!!! ;-)
Lovely poem... thank you for the precious offering:)
I am too old for you now. But I would have taken it when I was twenty. Loved it toatally.
A great offering...a precious piece. Loved it!
Blake SweenyGreen IV
wow, I'll take it, thank you. such a great piece, such a wonderful offering. I'll treasure it (well, I would if it were for me, ha)
... last line. :D:D
this one is realy great, i can see the whole adventure of it all (love) trapped in those seven lines:) it says alot for not saying very much!
short, sweet, awesome!! Thats all I can say! Keep it up!
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