Unloved in love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
a short poem about the emotions felt when in an unloving relationship.

Submitted: December 18, 2011

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Submitted: December 18, 2011



How can you say you love me when i feel so unloved, the closer i try to get to you the more you push and shove.You make me feel worthless and all alone got me thinking we would never have been had i'd of known.All the promises you made all the dreams we had tey were all just lies and fantasies thats what makes me so sad.I really did believe that you were the one for me, to keep me safe and warm eternally happy.I thought being with you would be noothing but paradise i would feel like im floating on clouds free and nice but as it stands this is more like hell, i wonder if you see my sadness or hear the pain i tell.

Why am i still wishing that hings will get better for you to tell me how much you care or send me a love letter.I want you to make my body tingle from your loving touch ami asking to many things is this all to much? To love and cherise your best friend and lover the women that looks after you and loves you like no other.Maybe one day we ma be back happily in love together or maybe the love will disappear for ever and ever so.......


How can you say you love me when i feel so unloved. <3



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