No More

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Poetry & Lyrics review corner

We all want to feel wanted, we all crave love that's simply how we were made. They say love hurts, no, trusting and confiding in someone who betrays you now that hurts.

No More...


Here I stand & there you go

Heart of sorrow

Heart of stone

What lies you've told...

You Have left me with no reason to stay.


Have I not loved you right?

Have I not tried to fight?

I have a lot - you have not.

So now Im done.


I will no longer apologise for all your lies,

I will no no longer care for your desperate cries!

You had me once,

hell, you had me under your trance


...but no more fairytales

I won't be biting my nails,

while my head screams in wonder of which beaut now lays under your flute.

Submitted: January 25, 2016

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Christopher Kush

Wow, this is a really heart-wrenching piece. It's so sad when those we put on pedestals destroy them those very pillars of idolization. It sounds as if you have come to a decision and are affirming it through this piece. I can hear the anger and sorrow through your words. It takes so much to open up to someone and leave yourself vulnerable to get hurt; when you do get hurt and your trust is shaken it's a difficult feeling to digest. I can understand where you are coming from, thanks for sharing this personal poem, your honesty is wonderful.

Mon, January 25th, 2016 9:55am


Seems like, I like putting people on that damned pedestal and every time Im left hurt & disappointed - when will I learn?!
Thank your for your kind words though...they mean a lot.

Mon, January 25th, 2016 1:59am

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