Dark or Light

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short poem about dark and light. Leave a like and comment if u like!

Screaming without light,

Blinded without dark,

Monsters lurk and creep,

People shout and scream,

In dark people die,

In light people cry.

 


Submitted: December 21, 2014

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Alun 333

Wow you got a way with words

Sun, December 21st, 2014 6:20pm

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Aw thx

Wed, December 24th, 2014 3:13am

Eclipse101

Wow... this is really good. I love it, definitely a like.

Wed, December 24th, 2014 4:32pm

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Aw, thank you ??

Wed, December 24th, 2014 8:40am

natalayaevans

Great job. Really amazing. In just six lines you just passed out a great message. That we strive for both and some part of us doesnt want it both; Darkness and Light.

Wed, December 24th, 2014 5:29pm

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Thank you and merry Christmas

Wed, December 24th, 2014 9:32am

Labyrinth Black

To be honest, I wasn't really sure about this poem, I wasn't even expecting ONE person to even read it, let alone comment on it! Thx guys, and virtual cookies to you all!

Sun, December 28th, 2014 10:48am

Winterspell

...... perfect. Just perfect. Yin yang is THE picture for this... nicely done.

Sat, January 24th, 2015 4:53am

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Thank you so much ^_^

Sat, January 24th, 2015 12:58am

Smiley113

I'm lovin' it... Lovely poem...

Sun, March 29th, 2015 4:31pm

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Thanks ^_^

Sun, March 29th, 2015 9:44am

silverdrip

Sweet. Simple yet Elegant is what I call something like this. A simple poem that doesn't take a full page but still shows the heart of the writer. Nice

Tue, January 26th, 2016 8:11am

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Thank you! ^_^

Tue, January 26th, 2016 4:20am

Buffershaker

This reads like some kind of nightmare scenario where one is existing in a crazy messed up world.Life and death are all around us but during life we must face our worst fears and kick those demons out into touch and allow the angels to spread their love upon us.Darkness is too prevalent in society today where heads roll and anxiety smashes us with it's crazy axe.

Mon, April 18th, 2016 5:49am

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I guess. Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot ^_^

Mon, April 18th, 2016 12:22pm

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