Someone Loves You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Sometimes, when you just don't give a Ra forsaken care about whether you live or die, read this.

Sometimes when you can't go on,

I know how you feel.

Sometimes when it feels like everything is wrong, 

When it feels just a bit too real.

Even when the skies are grey,

You've got to keep the depression at bay,

Coz someone loves you,

And even if you don't think that's true,

I know they do.


Submitted: December 24, 2014

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ruicamacho

The very same thing I try to say to whoever feels like this. But sometimes, they focus so much on the source of their sadness they forget to truly see what lies around them. Like from me.

Wed, December 24th, 2014 8:01pm

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This was kind of to my sister. She has to stay off school because of her condition. I didn't want anyone else to end up like that.

Wed, December 24th, 2014 12:03pm

Amy Furzane

I like the message from this poem. Eventhough we felt unloved, just remember that somewhere in this world, there is somone who cares and loves us. A like from me ;)

Mon, December 29th, 2014 11:53am

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Aw thank u

Wed, December 31st, 2014 2:51pm

DreamsThroughTheSky

The message you've created in 9 simple lines; I'm speechless (in a good way). I showed this to my depressed friend, and even though she doesn't believe it, she's starting to get better now! You have a way with words, to able to produce something with much meaning with simple words~ Like~

Fri, January 2nd, 2015 7:17pm

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Thank you. I was watching my sister while I wrote this. She was on her IPad, still in her pjs, I it almost made me cry, what her condition had turned her into. I am glad about your friend and also glad i might have helped just a little. ^________^

Sat, January 3rd, 2015 8:44am

Haley Kivett

I love this. Once again, this is beautiful. I will be praying for your sister. Keep praying for her too! I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me. Psalms :D

Wed, May 13th, 2015 4:12pm

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^_^ Yay

Wed, May 13th, 2015 10:05am

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