Night Songs

The sirens call my name... hark I hear passion calling...
I liked this very much

Are these night songs the reason for your insomnia? You know, I think that you should fly the flag at half mast at least because this is still erotic! Plus I like this funk - I love your poetry, just ride with it. :) ~ Nixie

I really like this poem Lacey.....

I must have the same mind as Nixie as I still get the erotic longing from this poem. The need for someone close to entwine with in the darkness.

Wonderful poem

Peace

Boneman

yes, definitely half mast! LOL. I like it too, the idea of listening to the night?/crickets?/frogs?/yourself? and longing for something. :-)

They call out..."hey foxy fiery red head! show us what you got!" ....it's only when you turn to cuddle that you hear the actual song of the chirps.

It's sooooo easy in life to slip into familiarity however sometimes that familiarity stunts our emotional growth. Takes a very long time to realize that our emotional growth has been stunted and it is at that time that nature and the universe start sending us signs to wake up. Your sleep is over, now get on your hiking boots because the terrain is rough but if you simply listen to what lovely little things like hummingbirds and dragonflies do for us then do you start your trek to your path to the soul of the universe.

Amazing how I react so naturally to your mind and how all of this is what came out when I read your poetry. poetry. poetry. poetry. (echoes down here)

Only certain people notice something changes. The rest of the world never realize that there is no growth or maybe, just maybe, they are truly happy.

Keep writing with fire, foxy red head.

Molding our bodies until they are fused into one

Our breaths synchronized as if in harmony

This is so DIVINE.....

Who the hell made u think that you r not good at it??

This is mindboggling and awesome buddy.....

lacey a really great poem. don't know what makes you think you are not so good at writing poetry. its subtely erotic...
the sense of longing in a restless mind, wanting something just out of reach for the moment. i think this is one of the best i have read for a while lacey.
snow xx

i like the differentiality of this poem. aha im not even sure if that was a word but it is now [:

well, well, well. beautifully written. Not erotica but pure love and romance. I can’t begin to tell u how beautifully this is written. Where have I seen this talent before? U really should reach out to a wider audience with this one. Seriously, its one of the best poems I’ve read. So simple yet alluringly beautiful. U reach out for his warmth, but he’s not there, for they sing a song of longing that echo’s through your restless mind. It’s the universe that’s calling out to you. Exactly how peachy puts it.
U see this longing in everything around you; from the stars and insects of the night, to the waking hours of a busy day: the sun, wind and rain, they all speak out to u.
Also it’s the night calling. A time when u want passion, but also the night creeps into our sub conscious. Its when we feel most vulnerable, and naked to our inner self. It’s when those little demons gnaw at our conscious self. You hear it in the world outside your window, because that world is also inside of u.
I love the image of the bodies becoming fused. This is something more powerful than erotica, and yet it is so delicate. As Shakespeare said:

“how with this rage shall beauty hold a plea,
Whose action is no stronger than a flower.”

In other words how can love withstand the decay of time, how can our emotions withstand the cruel battering they take? And yet love always survives, finds a way, and becomes real.
This poem shows a talent and depth you r only just realising. Embrace it and find your true self. Embrace it so we can follow your beautiful words, and share in all your emotions, as you share in ours through such beautiful words.

This is very romantic poem. I love it. It makes me wish that I had someone to share something like that. Excellent job my friend. The heart of a poet definately shows within the words that ou write. I love it. :)

Hey....just coming back to read other comments (actually just hoping i'm not insane)...

another thought tho...crickets and critics are such similar words.

you're mind was racing when you wrote this.

I love this! It was written beautifully!
And I hope you write more soon.
It sucks being in a funk. Its the worse >.<
~mandy

Lacey, this is erotically romantic.^^

aww i like itits rellynice

The poetry is just pouring out of you these days isn't it. This was really beautiful. I especially loved the way it ended.

Wow, thats great!

hi! lacey. thanx for writing something other than erotica. this night song is an eternal song, that'd echo through lovers' hearts. kutgw. ;-)

Well , that little devil sings inside your ears and when you wake up the story comes to you , and we have the pleasure . The pleasure to read your tales.

Hey girl, before I even read this I see 69 (lol, 69...okay anyways) people have read you, eighteen commented and twelve liked it, don't put your freak flag down!

Reading now...

Even if you only read every other line it's a sweet poem(try it;) Together its layers create a comfortable place...even lovers need a moment to just breath~rain

Beautifully expressed. I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you for sharing. :)