Orange...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Free form? IDK

 

 

Fingers pierce the orange skin and the sweet
Fragrance of citrus permeates the air as
Juice flies in every direction,
Bursting like little fireworks.
 
My eyes watch transfixed.
Strong fingers meticulously peel the fruit,
Expertly separating its sections,
Laying them out before us.
A slight smile brightens his eyes
As he generously holds out a piece.
 
My teeth sink into the segment
As he holds it steady allowing
My tongue to caress and savor.
Eyes lock and hold as we chew.
 
A drop of juice dribbles down his chin
As liquid squirts out and my eyes drop,
To his lips, slightly grinning as if
Aware of how erotic I find his mouth,
How badly I suddenly want to suck
That small drop off his chin before
My tongue peeks out delicately
Tasting the sweet flavor while
Rough morning stubble awakens
All of my senses making me painfully
Aware of every breath he takes.
 
I wonder if he knows how I’d love to lick
The juice from his fingers, slowly sucking
Each one into my mouth taking nourishment
As much from his spirit as from the fruit.
 
He offers another bite and I accept,
My mind lingering over the innocent pleasure
He brings simply by sharing himself.
 


Submitted: July 22, 2011

© Copyright 2021 Lacey Cummings. All rights reserved.

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Michael68

Wow. This is very sensual. I love the innocent seduction that you show with this. I don't think that I will be able to look at an orange the same way again. haha. Excellent job my friend. :)

Fri, July 22nd, 2011 7:45pm

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My job is done! Thanks Michael. I'm glad that you liked the poem. It's really nice of you to stop by and comment.

Fri, July 22nd, 2011 1:12pm

PaOohLiiNa

"How badly I wanted to suck". I'd have to say, this line stood out like it was on fire! Great poem, like Michael ^ said, the innocent seduction was really beautiful. Fantastic job Lacey =)

Sun, July 24th, 2011 2:48am

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Thank you. I'm kind of rusty so I really appreciate your kind review. Thanks for spending the time to read it.

Mon, July 25th, 2011 6:33am

air

Well done! Makes me think how we could take other parts of nature and/or food ... make em sexay!
You're a good writer,
You could probably make anything tasty and sexy!

Haven't seen you in forever.
Is very Good to see an old face!
Not that we are old of coruse! ;-)

Sun, July 24th, 2011 11:30pm

Author
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Lol, Ive been called worse than old. These days I wear that term like a badge of honor. Thanks for reading and commenting Air. :-)

Mon, July 25th, 2011 6:36am

Scarlett Rae

Who knew eating a orange could be so sexy?! The poem is so innocent yet so dirty at the same time - Love it! Very beautiful!

Tue, July 26th, 2011 6:39pm

JenniferNichole

Oooh I Like! ;) When you have used one perfectly loaded media such as an orange, and done soo much with it. Slooowing us down to appreciate each misty peel and focused us on things our minds dont usualy allow. That is Sensual. ;) I can't wait to read more of what you have in store for us, Welcome back. ~rain

Fri, September 9th, 2011 9:29pm

Robert Kerr

Fantastic imagery. I'll never be able to look at an orange the same way again. Simply, thank you for sharing yourself.

Sun, September 11th, 2011 6:12pm

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